I chose to write in red because this second essay is making me mad. Since i have a problem with focusing i cant finish the essay....when i read over what i came up with I'm disappointedbecause it makes no sense...and i can not seem to fix it. I don't like to research my topic....I think that the real problem i have is that i dread writing papers and find no interest to make it my best. I find it difficult to stay on topic and make my paper "flow"...I'm not to sure how to fix this or even how to make my paper any better but I'm sure ill make something happen!
any ideas...throw them my way asap!
oh and the little hopes and concerns thing didn't really make any sense to me...but then again i had another lack of focus moment so it didn't really interest me either....so Mr. jolly i would write a comment about it but there wouldn't be much to write and you would only be left disappointed.
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